tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post5678224265818011421..comments2024-02-17T13:12:02.048-06:00Comments on Rockets and Dragons: Exercise: Condensing for MarketingStephanie Barrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17772217449161603561noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-55964982826355993952010-05-13T23:58:55.949-05:002010-05-13T23:58:55.949-05:00Jeff, they are kittens. Real cute little kittens. ...Jeff, they are kittens. Real cute little kittens. And they talk. <br /><br />God I love fantasy.Stephanie Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17772217449161603561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-47609587420317573412010-05-13T22:31:47.164-05:002010-05-13T22:31:47.164-05:00First off, I don’t envy your task. Second, remembe...First off, I don’t envy your task. Second, remember I am nobody in the writing world and my opinion is that of a 35 years old construction foreman, who is only as deep as a shallow puddle. That being said let me ask a few questions that really confused me or parts I didn’t like.<br />Kittens? You mean real, little, cute, kittens? Just not getting the picture there…<br />I have read some of your writing and I know you have a ton of talent. This seems stiff and forced to me… believe me I know it is dang hard. Keep it up and I know you will get it.<br />With I had some advice, but the more I tried to give some the more I got confused. Keep your head up and push through it.<br />Just remember it has to hook you.Jeff Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667419764890599092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-73649534431248478362010-05-13T20:21:16.555-05:002010-05-13T20:21:16.555-05:00I have struggled with this. Condensing a carefully...I have struggled with this. Condensing a carefully plotted mystery or thriller into a paragraph (let alone a sentence!) is painful. Very.The Motherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157821003454766570noreply@blogger.com