tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post482480713978707338..comments2024-02-17T13:12:02.048-06:00Comments on Rockets and Dragons: More Substories of 50 wordsStephanie Barrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17772217449161603561noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-69443648028629006112010-07-10T10:05:07.984-05:002010-07-10T10:05:07.984-05:00No home to go to, but she'd be okay. She had h...No home to go to, but she'd be okay. She had her mother's quilt, the locket given her on her seventh birthday, and her great grandfather's poetry. <br /><br />Food would come with a bit of scrounging. It always did. Until then, her objects—her memories—would curb the hunger pangs.<br /><br />It ended up being 49 words. Best I could do. <br /><br />I like the predator one, and the POV I first thought would be the observer, but at the same time it made me feel pretty creeped out. Good work on your versions!Dr. Cheryl Carvajalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15323455180953109460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-73488024339698395502010-07-07T22:33:53.929-05:002010-07-07T22:33:53.929-05:00I think I'm glad I'm allowed lots more wor...I think I'm glad I'm allowed lots more words.The Motherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157821003454766570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-86767314810780658632010-07-07T22:15:11.215-05:002010-07-07T22:15:11.215-05:00I have been lazy lately... tons of work hours have...I have been lazy lately... tons of work hours have left me unable to write.<br /><br />Great practice though.Jeff Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667419764890599092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4864423579966406496.post-55645561653920020232010-07-07T18:45:59.294-05:002010-07-07T18:45:59.294-05:00I liked Predator the best. The first few lines hav...I liked Predator the best. The first few lines have you wondering is he going to show sympathy? Pity? Indifference? Then the true motives are revealed.Darrell B. Nelsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02851443183217238218noreply@blogger.com